3 نمونه استاندارد و تخصصی از (Motivation letter (Cover letter
امروزه خیلی از دانشگاه های معتبر دنیا در مقطع فوق لیسانس و دکتری از متقاضیان درخواست Motivation letter یا همان Cover letter را دارند. در این نامه متقاضی باید ارائه کاملی از توانایی های خودنشان دهد و ثابت کند که برای آن مقطع و موقعیت خاص بهترین گزینه می باشد.
نحوه نوشتن این نامه از اهمیت بسیار بالایی برخوردار است و می تواند تاثیر چشمگیری در پذیرش متقاضیان داشته باشد. از این رو تیم درخت جاویدان نمونه هایی از این نامه را به صورت رایگان آماده کرده است
Dear Sir or Madam:
With this letter, I would like to express my interest in studying at the University of XY as an Erasmus student.
I am currently studying Master’s Degree programme in Regional Geography at the ABC University in London. Having looked through the materials of the Foreign Department of my university, I was very delighted to find the opportunity to spend one semester learning geography at the University of XY. I have decided to apply for this programme because I am sure it would strongly enrich my future studies and help me in my prospective career. Moreover I consider this programme as a great opportunity to get in touch with British culture and educational system. Last but not least, I am very curious about different approaches to the geography at the foreign university.
I have chosen to apply for University of XY, because I really like its module system of study. I specially appreciate the wide range of offered modules and the freedom in making your study plan. Many of the modules offered are unique for me, because there is no equivalent at my home university. Very important for me is also an “Excellent” rating for teaching of the Geography department and the overall friendly atmosphere at both the university as well as the city. The third main reason why I have chosen XY is its Urban and Regional Policy Research Institute. It specializes in interdisciplinary research on key regional and urban policy issues, which is the field of geography very familiar to me.
During my prior studies I have found out, that I would like to specialize in Urban and Transport Geography. The University of XY gives me a chance to get in touch with these subjects through modules from both Department of Geography and Department of Town and Regional Planning. In my last year at the ABC University I worked on an empirical study with main focus on transportation costs of suburbanisation and urban sprawl. I really liked my project and I am keen to continue in it. I would like to use my stay in XY for further developing my skills in empirical research and starting working on my diploma project. The possibilities that gives me University of XY further expand those at my home university. I would take modules focusing on Transport and Urban geography and European Studies.
I would very much like to spend one semester at the University of XY. This would give me a chance to deepen my geographical knowledge in the inspiring, creative, and cosmopolite environment of one of the largest British universities. Furthermore I could improve my English and increase my confidence in passing the TOEFL examinations after I return. Moreover, I am confident that my experience in London would be extremely exciting, fun, and valuable for both my studies and overall general development.
Thank you for considering my request. I look forward to your positive response.
I am James Smith, the 3rd year student of XXXX University of Power Engineering and Telecommunications.
I have always been thinking about my future, building a career, becoming a successful person and generally finding my own path in the life.
Almost all my family including my uncles, aunts and cousins have their jobs which somehow connected to the field of technology. I have grown among intelligent people and it had great influence on the development of my personality so since early childhood I have learnt the importance of education.
My school teachers always noted that I had good abilities in such subjects as mathematics and physics. This increased my interest in exact sciences, and I decided to connect my future career with technological area of activity, wishing to gain success in the future. And if I become successful I will pay back my parents for their warmth and loving tender, as they have been those who have been supporting me throughout my life.
For that reason I constructed a plan for achieving this long-term aim. By the plan I accomplished some small objectives: graduated from school in the number of the best students and won a scholarship to study in XXXX University of Power Engineering and Telecommunications. This year I am going to graduate from the university, and plan to enter one of the best universities of the world for my Masters’ degree. As it was before I started to find one with an opportunity to win a scholarship. I spent much time searching, and at last I chose the XXXX University among other universities of the Netherlands.
The first acquaintance with your university began from collecting particular information about it. From the data I had found I managed to make some basic picture explaining why I chose it.
XXXX University is the biggest innovative centre which takes active part in the field of fundamental and applied sciences. Furthermore, the research investigations of students and scientists make a great contribution to the development of high technologies in and outside the Netherlands. In addition to investigative work the university keeps on stimulating entrepreneurial abilities in its students. It favoured the establishment of more than 600 thousand industrial companies which successively function on the basis of mutually beneficial collaboration with students and research personnel of XXXX University. Furthermore, I was astonished reading about implementations which are conducted there. For example, the development of virtual satellite dish or microchip with a solar cell which does not need batteries. All the articles about achievements of the university let me conclude that XXXX University is the most suitable institution to realize my potential.
As far as my pertinent work experience is concerned, I would like to mention that last summer I was undergoing training in local telecommunication company for 5 weeks. This company devotes itself to providing wireless broadband Internet access to its customers. As a trainee I had many duties starting from reconfiguring equipment and finishing by arriving to a certain client to set up a network. During the training I managed to acquire some specific skills, for example, how to organize conduit in different kinds of buildings or how exactly a cable laying is implemented. Likewise, I got to know the structure of telecommunication agency. In addition, I learnt the principles of team work and improved my communicative abilities. As a result, after completion of the training I was given a qualification of assistant engineer.
As regards my interests, I am glad to say that I am not a person who is only engaged in studies. I have dozens of activities which I like to do. Generally, I would like to note that I have always kept healthy lifestyle. I was taught that it is much better to struggle with your sicknesses by developing your health rather than taking drugs infinitely. All these clearly define my high interest in keeping healthy lifestyle that is reflected in my big love of sport. For instance, I am a real football fan which means that I enjoy playing and watching it. Thus I always try to find some time to go out and play such a wonderful game with my friends. What is more, the fact that football is the most famous sport in the Netherlands so there are plenty of professional football clubs which are recognized worldwide is another plus for entering your university. In addition, I also like such kinds of sports that upgrade strength, stamina, reaction and flexibility. That is why the list of my favourite sports is very wide including not only football, but also basketball, swimming, long-distance jogging, sprint, table tennis and recently I have found myself in martial arts especially Boxing and different kinds of wrestling. Finally, I cannot forget that reading books is another passion of mine. Thus, most of all I prefer science fiction, fantasy and detective novels as my favourite genres.
With respect to my future career, as I mentioned before the fact, that XXXX University links its activity with investigative work and at the same time develop entrepreneurial skills of its students, is a fundamental reason of why I desire to study exactly here. The question is that our nation is lack of highly qualified specialists in the field of telecommunication. What is more, as user I am not satisfied with the level of provision of different telecommunication services that are also very expensive and I am sure that I am not the only one who supposes so. I believe that our country has much more potential; therefore, as a true patriot, I wish to contribute to the development of the national telecommunication. In other words, if I gain the Masters’ degree in your university then I am going to return back to my homeland to make efforts to establish my own telecommunication company for the purpose of providing telecommunication of a high quality at a reasonable price. To implement such goal I need to improve my leadership qualities and acquire special knowledge in chosen field of education, which will be possible if I join XXXX University.
In conclusion, I would like to say that if I become a student of your university, I promise to be a worthy member of the team.
Thank you very much for considering my application. I look forward to your positive response.
Here you can see a motivation letter (personal statement, admission essay), written by a student who successfully enrolled in a Bachelor’s programme International Business and Management Studies (IBMS) at a Dutch university of applied sciences.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am applying for the International Business Management Studies programme at the XXXX campus of XXXX University of Applied Sciences. I am very interested in beginning a career in business and I am certain that this Bachelor’s programme will help me to fulfil myself in both professional and personal contexts.
I am currently finishing my last year of high school where I have spent a lot of time and effort learning subjects which reflect my preferences and interests such as mathematics, the English language, and subjects in the technological field. My drive has enabled my teachers to enter me in various competitions in these fields where I often end up in prize-winning places. I am also very interested in teamwork, and therefore participate in organising school events and supporting friends and classmates. I feel these activities will be the way in which I can make a difference and gain the leadership skills necessary to reach my goals.
My current goal is to start and develop my own business. After doing some research into Russian post-secondary programmes, I realised that this country cannot offer me the education I need to achieve this goal. The level of specialisation here is quite poor and teaching methods are mostly oriented on theoretical knowledge which I believe is nearly useless when it comes to real-life work.
I learned in school that the Russian Tsar, Peter the Great, went to the Netherlands to learn how to build ships and I have always wondered why he chose this country for his education and what else one can learn there. Since then, I’ve tried to find out more about the Netherlands and the more I’ve been learning, the more my motivation to study there has grown. The educational approach that is used in the Netherlands would provide me with the widest range of specialisations in the field of international business, as well as a lot of practical skills which is exactly what I need. When I found the International Business and Management Studies programme at XXXX University, I realised that it is the best choice for me for a number of reasons.
First of all, this programme covers the business topics that interest me the most, such as Finance, Economics, Marketing, and Communication. As a future business leader I must be an expert in these fields, capable of analysing and solving any practical problems I may face. I am certain that the numerous traineeships and case assignments I will take part in during this programme will help me to gain the necessary knowledge and skills.
The second reason I’m drawn to XXXX is the international environment it features. Looking at my future, I understand that the only way to be successful in today’s business world is to make it in an international context. At your university, the most international university of applied sciences in the Netherlands, I will learn how to communicate with people from different backgrounds to achieve the best working results which I believe will be the next big step in my development.
Thirdly, studying at your university will significantly improve my English skills. As one the most important languages in the world, English will help me to form new connections and expand my social network to a global level.
Finally, this programme will help me to develop myself as a team player and cultivate the leadership skills necessary for my future career. I will learn to be responsible not only for myself, but also for the whole team, which I believe is essential for a business manager.
I understand that studying abroad is going to be the most challenging step in my life so far, but I also believe I can withstand any problems I will face and make the most of the knowledge and experience gained through this study programme. I hope to contribute my talents and efforts to your university and become a worthy member of the team.
Thank you in advance for your consideration and time,
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