تجربه‌ی آزمون رایتینگ آیلتس محسن

تجربه‌ی آزمون رایتینگ آیلتس محسن ، از زبان آموزان درخت جاویدان

محل آزمون: ایرسافام
تاریخ آزمون: 10 آذر 97

Task 2

Shopping is the favorite pastime for most of the young people. Why do you think is that? Do you think they should be encouraged to do some useful activities in their free time?

Shopping has become an integral part of our life. Young people are more attracted to this activity which has become their favorite hobby. While there are many reasons, such as increased spending power and peer influences, attributed to this habit, some people argue that they should be encouraged to spend their time wisely in other useful activities. I completely agree with this view because time is the most precious thing in the world.

For one thing, the increased spending power is one of the main reasons for this addiction to shopping in societies. Compared to the past, there are many job opportunities available in the market, most of which pay fat paychecks, thus providing the opportunity to shop more frequently. 

Secondly, the young are easily influenced by their peers who go shopping almost every week. The recent survey conducted by SurveyMonkey.com on Bayshore Shopping Mall business in Kanata city, indicates that majority of their sales are coming from younger people who had just started their career..

Having said that, some people argue that our young society needs to be encouraged to spend their free time in better ways. I strongly agree with that, since time is the only irreplaceable thing. Instead of spending time in shopping malls, we should promote physical activities, such as sports and games. Joining a course in fast-growing domain – such as artificial intelligence – is another viable option which helps develop and enhance skill sets.

In conclusion, while it is true that young people are getting attracted towards frequent shopping, they should be advised to spend their free time more wisely on activities that could help them lead a more fulfilling life.

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