۶ انگیزه نامه یا SOP موفق
یکی از مهمترین مراحل اخذ پذیرش از دانشگاه انگیزه نامه SOP یا همان Statement of Purpose است، نامه ای که در آن باید اگیزه تحصیلی خود در آن دانشگاه را با زبانی شیوا خود را به دانشگاه شناسانده، اهداف تحصیلی و علایق حرفه ای خود را نوشته، و عوامل تاثیر گذار بر روی مسیر تحصیلی خود را بازگو کنید. در زیر ۶ انگیزه نامه یا sop موفق در رشته های مختلف را آورده ایم تا با قالب متن و جملات استفاده شده بتوانید انگیزه نامه مورد نظر خود را بنویسید.
Sample SOP for MS in Mechanical Engineering
The following draft was submitted to one of the Top Universities in Canada for the MS in Mechanical Engineering program. This is only a sample and events and specifics have been modified for the purpose of this sample:
STATEMENT OF PURPOSE FOR MS IN MECHANICAL ENGINEERING
As a Mechanical Engineering undergraduate student with an ardent interest in the industrial work environment, I have learnt the principles of mechanical engineering those are applicable to most machines, tools and processes which naturally widens my scope of learning and research. This has intrigued me to explore the option of pursuing master’s course in Mechanical Engineering from your prestigious University, which I believe will not only supplement my knowledge that I have acquired but also provide me with the best possible platform for the attainment of my future goals. I draw my inspiration towards this field from my mechanical engineer father who serves as a Mechanical Supervisor in a government run organization, National Fertilizers Limited. He was the one who introduced me to machines like Lathe Machine, Gear Cutting Machine, Hydraulic Cutting Machine, Steam Turbines, Compressors etc. and plants like Steam Generation Plant, Ammonia Plant at a very impressionable age. This naturally triggered in me a desire to know more about what happens inside these machines and the reason behind their precise and accurate working. Also, my frequent visits to the industry enabled me to retain as well as enhance my keen interest in the field and thus, influenced me to pursue my undergraduate course in Mechanical Engineering.
Due to my innate interest in the field of Mechanical Engineering and impressive performance in the engineering entrance examination, I secured a seat in this discipline of engineering at the coveted Punjab Technical University, Punjab. My undergraduate major has given me a wide exposure to numerous subjects like Thermodynamics, Refrigeration and Air Conditioning, Heat and Mass Transfer, Mechanics, Mechanical Vibrations etc. My under graduation has been a rewarding experience as I got numerous chances to visit industries to gain a close look at the application of mechanics and its related theories. I possess immense quest for knowledge which enabled me to score more than 90% marks in practical labs of all above-mentioned courses. In addition to this, with the increasing role of computers in every field of engineering, I underwent career enhancing certifications like AutoCAD and pro-e which helped me to learn various design aspects.
Owing to my interest in the concepts pertaining to Refrigeration & Air-Conditioning, Thermal & Fluid Sciences, Heat & Mass Transfer, I submitted a project in final year based on Regenerative Braking System for an Electric Bicycle, which works on principle of conservation of energy i.e. converting the heat lost on applying brakes into electrical energy, which was well received and appreciated by department professors and H.O.D as well. The concept for this project is to demonstrate a regenerative braking system on an electric bicycle.The ultimate goal is to use the energy regained from the RBS as an acceleration “boost” on the bicycle. Although the final goal of repurposing the stored energy into an acceleration boost was not achieved, a fully functional electric bicycle with regenerative braking was built. The regenerated power was even stored in a capacitor, so finding an appropriate use for that electricity should not be difficult.
Sample SOP for MS in Electrical Engineering
The following SOP was submitted at a Top University in USA for the Masters in Electrical Engineering Program. This is only a sample. Events, names and specifics may have been modified for the purpose of this sample:
I would not for once venture to suggest that I always knew what I wanted to do. My career aspirations are not childhood dreams but rather a work of consistent absorption of knowledge and learning about the domain. It was all about finding my path and the journey started from my curiosity about semi-conductors. Growing curiosity and a normal penchant for science and especially physics and mathematics saw me opting for Electronics and Communication Engineering. From thence started my understanding of the domain which slowly and gradually grew into admiration and then a strong passion.
Learning about VLSI Design, I knew I wished to make a career within the said domain and decided that I would gain a better understanding by pursuing masters in electrical engineering and becoming an expert within the sector. My humble beginnings offered me modest living amidst strong respect for academic excellence. My grand-father, an English teacher, would often take out time to condition my mind and encourage me to take the path of education. Supported by equally informed parents, I succeeded throughout my school years in every domain. Such has been my journey that on one hand I have the honour of being the captain of the cricket tournament winning school team and on the other, I have the credit of standing first in my school and being applauded for the same. Moving with such a feathered cap, my graduation year was bound to have an illustrious tenure and as promised, it was.
Choosing Electronics and Communication Engineering was by far the wisest decision of my life for the subjects fell in the natural scope of things in my life. I was able to quickly assimilate the information and readily implement the same in a variety of projects. While my performance was excellent in all subjects throughout my graduation, I was effectively fascinated by VLSI design. And due to strong affliction for VLSI design, I have done my major projects in this domain. My major project was design and verification of dual port asynchronous RAM using HDLs. The project completed under the mentorship of Mr. XYZ received excellent appreciations and a “Bravo” from the organization, further instilling in me the confidence to keep working in the domain.
Sample Statement of Purpose (SOP) for MS in Civil Engineering
This Sample has been submitted for the MS in Civil Engineering at one of the top universities in USA. The contents may have been modified to suit the purpose:
Statement of Purpose for MS in Civil Engineering
After three and half years of undergraduate study in Civil Engineering, I feel completely satisfied with my decision to choose engineering as my career option as it has revealed the most pragmatic and down-to-earth approach to tackling human problems to me. My enthusiasm coupled with scope for innovations and opportunities available in the field of Civil Engineering has motivated me to opt for higher studies and contribute to the field through meaningful research. I sincerely believe that pursuing graduation at XXX University at this juncture of my career will be an ideal step in this direction.
My decision to major in Civil Engineering is a direct result of my desire to contribute to the development of state-of-the-art infrastructure in my country, aiming towards improving its global standing. Foundation of this lies in my childhood admiration of my father, a civil engineer who I frequently accompanied for his site visits. Each time I visited the site and witnessed the machines and related processes, my excitement and inquisitiveness knew no bounds. My desire to pursue my MS in Civil Engineering stems from the gradual accumulation of theories and naïve practical applications of the observed concepts during the site visits.
During my under graduation in Civil Engineering at GLA Institute of Technology, Mathura, I gained my initial formal exposure to Construction Management through courses like “Building and Construction Material” and “Design of Buildings”, which opened my eyes to the latest construction technology and management methods. The course in “Construction Management” highlighted the importance of effective team coordination for project execution in quality construction practice and exposed me to plethora of applications of Operations Research in Project Management.
In the third year of my under graduation, I received in-depth practical knowledge during the six-month industrial training during which, I was a part of a commercial building project for DLF. Here, I took upon the task of performing a study of testing of materials procured for mix design and design of reinforced concrete structures. Also I had the opportunity to visit and learn about surveying. In addition, I was exposed to the various aspects of Construction Engineering and Management and interacted with the engineers involved with futuristic activities that thoroughly inspired me and reinforced my decision to pursue my graduate study in this field.
Sample SOP for MS in MIS (Management Information Systems)
The following draft was submitted to one of the Top Universities in Singapore for the Masters in MIS Program. This is only a sample and events and specifics may have been modified for the purpose of this sample:
Statement of Purpose
Management Information Systems is a rapidly emerging field. What started years ago with manual systems like Customer Databases and Catalogues has evolved into modern concepts such as Predictive Data Mining. Rapid developments in the field of Information Management have left me fascinated with MIS. Having worked in SAP-ABAP for over two years and having gained in-depth knowledge of its importance and business applications, I feel that I am ready to move forward in the field of MIS. To keep up with the advancements in this field and prepare myself to meet the demanding standards of this industry, I wish to pursue a graduate program in Management Information Systems from your esteemed University.
In my high school, my keen interest in logically oriented subjects led me to take up Mathematics, Physics, and Chemistry as my major subjects. In my twelfth grade, as part of my Physics project, I had constructed logic gates and simple latches using basic circuit elements and was greatly amazed by the potential of the electrical and electronics stream. Subsequently, I topped my school in the tenth and twelfth grade securing 87.2 % and 90% respectively.
During my undergraduate studies at Birla Institute of Technology, Ranchi, I was excited by the diversity of the field of Electronics and Instrumentation Engineering. In my bachelor program, the courses like Network Analysis, Signals and Systems, Microprocessors and Microcontroller, VLSI Technology and Design and Process Control helped me learn the aspects of system implementation. On the other hand, courses like Data Structure, Operating System, C, C++, JAVA, Data Communication and Computer Network helped me understand how the concepts of computers are applied to practical systems in day-to-day life.
During the course of my study, I also learned to program in Embedded Systems, which in turn, fascinated me to apply the concept in my major project “Voice Recognition Robotic Car Based on Voice Recognition Algorithm”. The project uses components such as 2.2 or higher version Android Phone, Bluetooth, AVR, Battery, Motor Driver and an LCD for output. The Bluetooth module AUBTM-20 is configured using the terminal software. The Bluetooth module receives a signal from Android Phone using an application CELLBOTS. The received signal goes to the microcontroller which controls the motion of robotic car connected to 1293D whose output is in turn, connected to BO motors that depend on rpm and this will show the required result on alphanumeric LCD. To supplement my learning from the project, I underwent training on Rail Net, Networking Hub, Server, Switch, and Electronic Exchange Working at Western Railway Ratlam Division. I also underwent training in C, C++, JAVA, MATLAB, VLSI, PLC and Embedded Systems.
After my undergraduate program, I joined TATA Consultancy Services Limited. During my ILP (Initial Learning Process) at, I stood amongst the top 10 students who got to choose their preferred technology for learning. Subsequently, I learned JAVA, Testing, SQL, and DBMS. Later, based on my JAVA programming skills, I was selected in British Gas (Leading Oil and Gas Company) for training in SAP-ABAP. In my 2+ years’ experience in SAP-ABAP, I have worked on reports including Classical, Interactive and Object Oriented Reports, Dialog Interface including BDC, BAPI, and IDOC, Data Dictionary, Smart Forms, Module Pool, enhancements including User Exits, BADI, SAP Performance Tuning and Trouble Shooting. I have also worked on few complex objects such as Contract Copy, a program for adding new line items and updating the net price of line items. Apart from SAP-ABAP I have also worked in Material Management Module (MM) and received appreciations from clients as well as from our functional bodies.
Now, after having acquired the basic aptitude, skills, knowledge and work experience in the field of Information System, I feel this is the apt time to pursue my graduate study in the field of my interest and strongly believe that my aptitude and aspirations find a terrific match in your program. Browsing the pages of your University’s website, I find myself certain that pursuing this program is the ideal step for my academic as well as professional career. After researching on the courses offered by the Department of Computer Information Systems at your University, I have decided to apply for the Master’s program in Management in Information Systems at XXX, Singapore.
Given the confluence of my personal and professional interests, my goal is to obtain a master’s degree and then to work in an IT-related industry. When I have gathered enough experience and skills, I plan to launch a consulting company of my own. Attending a Master of Science in MIS program will enable me to carve a niche for myself in the industry along with deepening my expertise and broadening my perspectives. Thus, I sincerely request the esteemed Admission Committee to favorably consider my application and provide me with a suitable platform for the attainment of success in my desired field.
Sample SOP for MS in Telecommunication Engineering
The following statement of Purpose was submitted at one of the top universities in Australia for Masters in Telecommunications. Facts and Figures may have been modified for discretion purposes:
Statement of Purpose
With an aim to be an instrumental part of the Electronics industry, I undertook my undergraduate degree in Electronics and Telecommunication Engineering from the reputed Smt Kashibai Navale College of Engineering affiliated to University of Pune. My academic background in Electronics and Telecommunication Engineering coupled with my innate interest to explore the nuances of the industry, I have realized and observed a drastic yet consistent sophistication in the electronic products and services across the world. My exposure to the development and functioning of products and services like high definition TV infrastructure, mobiles, tablets, broadband Internet services, satellite broadcasting and GPS technique has intrigued me to the core and led me to believe that there is much more to create, explore and discover in this field. Thus, my decision to now pursue my graduate degree in Electronics and Communications seems the most logical extension of my academic career.
During my undergraduate study, amongst the subjects I was exposed to, courses like Digital Signal Processing, Computer Networks, Mobile Communication, and Telecommunication Switching System enthralled me. Also, emphasis on practical sessions based on Coding and Modulation Techniques, Spectrum Analyzer, Digital Storage Oscilloscope, MATLAB software and Networks greatly enhanced my interest in the field of Communication.
I have always garnered an interest in developing projects that positively affect the society as a whole. Pursuing my interest, in my third year of under graduation, I along with my team members, developed the project “Advanced Bus Tracking System & Management for Passengers”. The project involved a system that displayed inside the bus as well as on the platform the nearest and approaching buses, stations and approximate distances between stations. For this, we deployed use of (AT89C51) Microcontroller and (CC2500) Transceiver. My role in the project was to design the circuit and the printed circuit board (PCB) using Proteus software. Moreover, we developed, simulated, and implemented the code of the project using Keil software. In India, where population density of people (and of buses) is very high, the project instantly clicked with the passengers while testing with the Transportation Department.
Later, the project “Advanced Bus Tracking System & Management for Passengers” advanced into more people centric “Smart Passenger Assistant System with Advanced Bus Security” based on Embedded System & Wireless Communication. As part of this project, the safety systems in the bus sent warning messages to emergency numbers in case of accident and fire. Here, we used the Arduino platform and designed the circuit and the Printed Circuit Board (PCB) using Eagle software to make the system even more versatile. During this project, I learned extensively about sensors, GPS and GSM technologies. This project led me to visit Bharat Sanchar Nigam Limited (BSNL) – India’s largest telephone company and Prasar Bharati (Doordarshan) – the oldest and largest public broadcaster, to gain first-hand experience of these technologies. The scale at which the various baseband systems employed in the reception and transmission processes of real time data work, captivated me. I also gained a whole new perspective about Antenna and Wave Propagation System.
I am currently undergoing training at BSNL, where I have learned the basic concepts of Telecommunications. As part of this training, I also aim at learning different technologies involved in current generation telecommunications products. My long-term goal is to work in the research and development sector, where I want to develop product designs with high efficiency and productivity which will prove beneficial for society. I believe pursuing MS in Telecommunications and Network Engineering will lead me towards fulfillment of my career goal.
At University of ABC, I would expand on my technical horizons by learning from theoretical courses like Wireless, Cellular and Personal Telecommunications, Fiber Optics, and Network Security. I would also expose myself to the practical aspects of Telecommunications, by working at the Antenna Lab and Wireless Systems Lab. The research being undertaken in the field of Antenna Design and Wireless Communications is closely aligned with my interests. The opportunity to work and study under Prof. ABC and Prof. XYZ will serve to enhance my understanding of the subject, and give me the edge I require to become a successful Engineer in this field. If given an opportunity, I assure you my dedication, diligence and my desire to excel would allow me to make a remarkable contribution to the university. I look forward to a positive response from the admission committee.
Sample SOP for MBA
The following draft was submitted to one of the Top Universities in USA for its MBA Program. Though most of the Universities have specific Admission Essays for their MBA courses, some of them also require a generic Statement of Purpose or Personal Statement. This is only a sample and events and specifics have been modified for the purpose of this sample:
Statement of Purpose for MBA Programs
My strong desire to give back to my community coupled with my experience in the telecommunication sector has inspired within me the desire to set up a Telecom company specific to the rural sector in the state of Bihar. The strong growth curve of the state, which recently noted second highest GDP in the country, is still marred with low mobile usage. With 85 percent population of the state still in villages and dependent on agriculture, I wish to use the technology to bring innovation to the agricultural sector. In order to achieve this long-term aspiration, I now need to further enhance my understanding of the functional aspects of management. I envision myself joining a Telecom major like Telefonica in order to process the ways and project execution methods before setting up my own Telecom Consultancy in the State of Bihar. And an MBA is the crucial next step towards my goals.
I come from a rather humble background and had long learned that there are no shortcuts to success. Hard-work, dedication, and determination were my best friends and I constantly worked to achieve the best in my academics. I was awarded a full scholarship – a special grant by the Vice Chancellor of XXX University – reserved for the top 1 percent students. Maintaining the momentum I excelled in my graduate studies. Holistic development ensured that I was picked up by the first company which came to my college for placement.
Moving on to the professional front, I came face to face with organizational structure and the changing team dynamics. Unlike college, the workplace was more driven by deadlines and client requirements. Working in the mobile technology, I soon started to improve on my analytical skills and was able to comprehensively improve my decision-making abilities. The opportunity to work away from my country added to my learning curve. I moved to the developed countries of South Korea and the USA and was amazed by the difference in work ethics and cultures. The transformation of South Korea from a war-ridden third world country to a technologically driven economy added value to my ambitions and gave a completely different perspective to success and determination. Determined to make the most of it, I found myself extending my own boundaries and was able to do that. Inspired, I was constantly appreciated in my office and often awarded for my out of the box thinking. I received the SNAP Award twice for team excellence and technical acumen. Recently, I took on the onus of setting up a WIMAX lab as per client requirements. When the client had requested for the same, there was nobody in my office who had the necessary technical expertise/ experience for doing the same and the team was given a time period of 3 months to set up this lab. Rising up to the challenge, I created a team of 5 engineers, took up the responsibility of training myself and my team and achieved the target in a record time of 1 month. The endeavor fetched me great accolades and I was recommended to the Business Unit Director for the “Individual Excellence Award.”
I was committed to a job when an incident changed my thought process and instilled in me a strong urge to work towards the development of my state by means of technology. It so happened that the State Government decided to construct the state highway (SH 81) through my hometown. The news excited me and wanting to witness the same I went back home. However, I was appalled to find the resistance of the farmers. Passionate towards my village and knowledgeable about the benefits, I could not let ignorance stand in the way of development and decided to take an active part. I started with the village headman and took on the onus of spreading information. Walking with him to each house, creating a dialogue and convincing people to choose reason over emotion, I was able to finally convince the majority and create a steady platform for dialogue between villagers and authority. The incident left me comparing the state to the countries of the world.
My experience had made me wiser of the opportunities and necessities and I was aware of how technology was changing that path. The pictures, information available on the internet all helped in convincing and I knew I wanted to bring Technology to every small village of my country. I returned to my work with the same desire and focused on the many possibilities and it was then that I realized that to be an entrepreneur I needed much more than just my technical skills. I need to add to my analytical mind the thought process of a strategist, to the resolutions of an engineer the planning of a manager and I knew an MBA was the best way forward.
Decided on an MBA, I am convinced that ABC’s unique position as an international MBA is perfect for my short and long term goals. The customizable curriculum, the flexibility of the program and the focus groups would effectively improve my entrepreneurial skills. Working alongside inspired individuals from all across the globe by means of the Global Consulting Program, getting the perspective of the industrially relevant studies and being mentored by the prominent faculty would ensure that my time spent at Illinois is in continuation of my experience rather than a detour. Adding force to my mid-term goals is the strong alumni network as well as the internships, study abroad trips as well as case competitions, which would ensure that I get the best leg up towards my aspirations of joining Telefonica. And while I aspire to gain my dreams by completing the MBA from your esteemed university, I look forward to giving back in equal measure.
I bring with my candidature a strong amalgamation of the best and the worst living conditions and how it can effectively change the world we live in. I have always believed that leaving back the darkness does not make it go away and I was forever inspired to change that. It was perhaps the reason which triggered my ventures in college which helped me become a successful team player and an articulate leader. Moving to Illinois, I look forward to sharing the same enthusiasm and bringing that world to my peer network, sharing the facts and figures of the area and how such parts of the world still need a helping hand, not merely from the country but also from the international community.
My life’s second chapter was written with a golden pen and I have been around the world. My work took me to the streets of South Korea and the avenues of America. Working in the distinct economies, I was both inspired and educated. From South Koreans, I learned the art of making work your family. The strong community ties and the ambitions that have guided the country to such success have led me to my own ambitions and made me believe that my dream of giving a new lease of life to my birthplace is a possibility. The freedom of choice, the dedication and the strong tolerance towards a multitude of ethnic beliefs of America has made me respect various cultures and prepared me to adapt effortlessly to global teams. Moving to Illinois, I envision myself swiftly transitioning into a leader and bringing to the peer group the maturity of working in multi-cultural teams while I hasten towards my own aspirations and carve out my future to bring smiles.